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Just wondering, is there anything that bothers you in The Untold? 

58%
57 deviants said Nah, all's fine.
7%
7 deviants said Please, stop those walls of text.
7%
7 deviants said Give me some plot!
6%
6 deviants said Not enough Pokemon.
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6 deviants said Give me some action already!
5%
5 deviants said Too much Khail.
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5 deviants said Other (please comment)
4%
4 deviants said Too many questions and no answers in sight.
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1 deviant said The universe is too strange...
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No deviants said Too long/short pages.

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:iconmarinnafallenangel:
MarinnaFallenAngel Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016
Not enough half-naked Khail ? Everything else is perfect, though ~
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jadethestone Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't really have any major problems with your story. I guess there are some things I find strange, such as the inclusion of actual animals alongside pokemon, and the whole mana/magic thing, but that's more uniqueness and not much of a problem. I really love your world-building, almost to the point where I sometimes ask myself "why not just make it a whole different comic in a non-Pokemon world?". But that would defeat the purpose of the nuzlocke aspect, obviously, haha. That probably doesn't help you much, since these are more observations that I've had than issues. Overall, I like your comic and I think you balance the different parts of it well. Keep it up!
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Sageloser123 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I admit, I love the story and your worldbuilding is fantastic- Plus the fact Khail is hot. Khail's a bit of a gary-stu. He's too 'perfect' basically.
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DorkyyAzn Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016
I really like the story and the worldbuilding is fantastic but I have to say that Khail is a bit of a gary-stu.
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:iconcitypoppy:
Citypoppy Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016
I think all of its good :D (Big Grin) Love 
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BlazeGlory Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016
To be completely honest I think there isn't enough Khail (if that is even possible considering he is the protage, but I just find him so amusing)
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I think the walls of text might be annoying or tiring to read but they're very necessary for world-building.
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's good, I just want a little more action.
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KINFIN123 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My only problem is that I need to go back and read from the beginning since I joined later in.
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thecat3321 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It is great how it is Love the story:D (Big Grin) :happybounce: 
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