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The Untold -  part 54 by Antarija The Untold -  part 54 by Antarija
Don't trust a smiling Khail. Never. It's doom.  : I

Wee, an update in less than a month, yaaaay...  Still it was supposed to be ready at least a week ago. Well, me getting a Castlevania game wasn't really helping in that, haha...


Trutututuuu, info time:

- I've mentioned it somewhere before that the lights in Castelia are the enchanted crystals, no normal torches. It means that only Trainers/Summoners can light them. And the duty of that lays on Guild and their city guards. I just wanted to show that they have a job, ok? : U
- That thing in the water was supposed to be a water wheel. I tried ;^;
- Khail changed his outfit back to something more similar to how he dressed back in his camp (just borrowed it from some laundry in the city : U), in order to be recognized as the infamous Raging Crows' bandid and not the Trainer Khail that has an official battle the very next day. He does think logically sometimes after all. Also the scarf on his neck is just his usual bandana. The logo on it is Raging Crows' sign (usually just worn on it's backside), every member has it both on their clothing and as a tattoo.  Here is the full image of it if you're interested together with Khail's "working clothes" design Raging Crows by Antarija And of course I just noticed I switched sides of his haircut... I'm a genius

- Khail is taking the poor grunt's corpse on a walk just to toss him somewhere where he can be found.
- The song he's singing has been shamelessly stolen from count Dracula from Hotel Transylvania cebause I love that movie and I have no shame : D www.youtube.com/watch?v=3A4q9l…
- Ok, about Madame Vlora - as you might, or might nor, remember she's a courtesan and an owner of the inn and an exlusive brothel  for the chosen ones in one-  the Gracious Swanna. She's also a spy master of her courtesan's info web and an informant not working for Ishara (aka the gang boss of this town and the grand master of the spies). She's also asked Khail to not set the town on fire and cause any more problems than Castelia already has during his stay, because it's just one step from the war between the Trainers Guild and Team Plasma here  (yes, it was in the infamous part 43).
Vlora can be called a friend of Khail in some sort, or at least she cares for him quite a bit and generally are on very good terms with that guy, usually she was able to persuade him out of some of his... less decent ideas.
But not this time! :dummy:
- Yes, we will get to the massacre in the next part alredy : U




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BlueSacredFire Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Shoot I caught up with the updates. I cant wait for more they're really awesome! 

I love the concept that you have in the story the lore and everything. I honestly read this all last night and just finished this morning. Fffff.. Well my morning = 12 as of late but still. and I know it sounds weird considering this is the first time I've commented..... and its on part 54. Fashionably late? 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome aboard!

Thank you so much, I'm really glad  you think so!  (If you didn't eat a dinner yet, it means it's still the morning =w=b)
Haha, that's fine, I'm just happy you enjoyed it!
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2017
Maybe Khail should had dentist to his long list of professions.

If he know that song then surely he'll be singing this one at his entrance ceremony for team plasma: www.youtube.com/watch?v=fhZ5bv…
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have that feeling he might be pretty good at it ; D

That... would suit it so damn well xD But to be honest, I didn't remember this song ever being in Trigun...?
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ShadeOfObscurity Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2017
It happened when a train was being hijacked.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmmm.... I guess it's possible. It was so long ago I don't remember much of it to be honest... ^^"
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:iconliquidpear131:
Only Khail would drag a dead man through streets singing a lullaby. Nice haircut by the way. ^o^
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, yeah, he's a special child ; P
Thanks, I think he might've been missing it all this time ;]
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2017
That smile!!! He could get me to confess to anything!! 😘😘😘😘😏😏😏😏
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, that would make his job a lot easier xD
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017
but his jobs not supposed to b easy :p
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True ; D
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2017
I’d LOVE to see ur interpretation of the horse Pokémon: Rapidash, Zebstrika, etc as actual horses
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And I think I might actually try to do that one day :>
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Absollover13 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2017
YAY!!! THAT WOULD BE AMAZING TO SEE!!!
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg czy to źle o mnie świadczy, że śmiałam się przy piosence Khaila mimo tego, co oznacza i co stało się wcześniej? Spaczenie we mnie jest silne XD
 Khail you psycho! D:
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Naaaah, to calkiem poprawna reakcja. Miszcz psychodelicznosći ci to mówi vb
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Khail's outfit is really cool I love the raging crows logo ovo
also hats off to the plasma guard for hanging in there till he died tho I think if Khail came up to me with a pair of pliers I'd just nope the heck out of there X'D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you, though I'm just glad I don't have to draw it on every panel xD

same :I
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2017
Oh, Khail, you sexy crazy motherfucker.
I hope he is aware he cannot deal with the big boss with... that little power. :/
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohoho, someone here seems to be underestimating a certain crazy motherfucker~

Either that or Khail is just really bad at reasons... ^^'
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XiwyCain Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2017
I'll sayThe Road to El Dorado Emoticon Gif  both
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
xD
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Drayle88 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!

CURSE YOU AND YOUR CLIFF HANGERS

But really, I'm guessing Khail is the anti-hero type? Not a good guy and probably a bad guy for good reason? Seriosuly, you're writing is brilliant. I WANT all this to end on the off chance you print it, because DANGIT TO ARCEUS I would buy this book. 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cliff hangers for the wiiiin! \('^')/

Omg, THANK YOU SO MUCH! And yes, you're right about him, I just hope I'll be able to show his reasons properly one day.
Thank you. hug 
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Drayle88 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
totally running Khail as the 'bad' guy in my D&D game. Gonna be awesome
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, just remember that in normal situations some of his choices might end up in a quick yet still pretty painful death xD
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ProfShiro Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Boi.
You're insane and I somehow love it.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Or he's just pissed. That  might often be mistaken for an insanity ; P
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ProfShiro Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
That's another way to put it.
Still, his expression is marvelous =w=
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TheFourthSword Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017
Damn, I love how Khail is written honestly, I can't get over it!!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THANK YOU SO MUCH QwQ
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CodeBlackRin Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2017  Student Artist
Welp.....
I guess this is how we do it now: First Gav who died and now a random cute little newbie.

Khail. I dont even care anymore :'D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There will be more of them in this story, I guarantee it~

xD
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CodeBlackRin Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Student Artist
BTS Emoticons#5 BTS [Bangtan Boys] [BTS] Taehyung shookBTS Sup Jungkook 3 
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I really like how you did the torture scene. What makes it good for me is what was not shown! the suspense the anticipation the way the reader is led from one point to another. Really nicely done!

also ngl I thought the waterwheel was a a metal saw being washed at first XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :> I'm really glad you liked it! It ooks like sometimes not showing everything is the best way

Actually, that might really look more like that, haha xD
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017
ON THE 9th PANEL THAT PLASMA GUY CALLED THE GUILD TRAINERS HYPOCRYTES?! LOOK WHO'S TALKING
WOW! KHAIL IS ACTUALLY INSANE!!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hypocrytes everywhere! :dummy:
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Defianent Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017
Isn't that song from Hotel Transylvania?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup ;]
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LoppyLibby Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Read the description.....=-=
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Defianent Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017
XD
Sorry
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RaineyJ Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
That was was a quick update :0 

Love the original bandit outfit, it's pretty intimidating, haha. The logo is really cool too. I always have heaps of trouble coming up with logos, so I'm always jealous of people that make such good looking ones >w<

Infiltrating the castle sounds like it's gonna be quite the challenge D: 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The cruelty.... QwQ


Haha, thank you. I really like designing this type of clothes, but... I do realize that drawing something like that in a comic again and again would be a nightmare...

I'm terrible at logos, you have no idea how long it took me to came up with this one, and even then I had to bother my siblings for help more than once xD

A Challenge is Khail's second name! Yokoi Fired Up Icon  (welp, maybe not really, buuuut)
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Koolj13 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Question. Are all his pokemon too scared to talk to him or did he just put their stones somewhere?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That will be explained in next parts.
 But other than that Trainers can also simply lock their Pokeballs so their Pokemon don't come out randomly whenever they feel like it.
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ECHO173 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017
Well ... Khail had a fun time
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Antarija Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup. And there's more where this one came from! :dummy:
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