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The Untold - part 46

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We're finally baaaaack! \(*^*)/
And my first thoughts about this part was that.... I can't draw cities for ***! Akari Akazaki (Smirk and Cries) [V1] 
(Just leave me alone, I tried ok?! *sob* ) QAQ

Coughcough. Anyway.
I believe I've mentioned it at some point that Khail is a womanizer. I guess being in a big city is a good opportunity to show that to the point when every girl will start to hate him! :dummy: Be prepared.
And to be honest I have a big problems with N... I wanted to portrait him as a naive and socially awkward guy with a tendency to some creepiness at times, but at the same time to show that he has something on his mind and can be serious. Especially about his beliefs. And basically he thinks that what he knows is the common knowledge so he feels no need to explain himself, and thus is a big annoyance to anyone he tries to talk to... . I'm not sure if it works...
Not to mention that I wish I had shown their first encounter completely different. But well, that happens when you're making the story up as you go. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Trivia:

- Akashe never really managed to win any match against Khail, so he's pretty excited to have Asahi as his opponent.
- Khail knows no manners and just borrowed Asahi's Braviary, because they're in the forest outside of the Castelia, since Asahi has no Trainer license.
- In part 43 (the game-ish one) when you met N he mentioned that he wanted to talk with Khail again, and that's why he's here once again.
- In Pokemon Black/White, you don't meet N in Castelia, but I believe that at this point you know pretty well that I'm not keeping this story true to the one known from the game. It's all for the plot. And for developing N's character a bit.
- I though that it would make more sense if N was the one to talk about heroes and dragons ect instead of Ghetsis.
- Khail often uses sarcasm.
- N does't get sarcasm.
- When N says something about Khail's aura, he means an aura that any Pokemon user (Trainer/Summone ect.) have. I think I did mention it  before, but I will work on the lore for this if you're interested. For now you only need to know that every Trainer can see the aura of another Poke-uses, if they focus, and every aura is a very specific one.  The stronger you are, the better you see it and you can even recognize people by it, not only say how strong your opponent is. Really  strong Trainers (on Gym leaders lvl or so) can somehow hide their aura to make it look weaker, but they cannot erase it or change it's "nature". But maybe N sees something more? Who knows.
- I hate that market. I. HATE. IT.
- Actually I think I failed to show it back at the very beggining of this run, that when Khail told N that he can understad Pokemon, that was a sarcasm. Nobody should have believed that. But N is a special child. And that's why he's got so attached to Khail.
- The Order of the Original One is the main religion in this world but there are many other smaller cults, or whatever you call them, for many other legendaries, but they mostly have the status of  lesser gods. You know, as with Zeus and all the rest. But the Twin Heores legend would be considered a blasphemy, due to some reasons~


Cameos:
:iconmad-revolution: 's Eugene
:iconlonelycity: 's Nico's back
:iconbekkomi: 's Ely
:iconkat-wysteria:
:iconskadierendra: 's Maki
:iconraineyj: 's Eva and Gao
:iconignusthetrickster: 's Jo
:iconjadethestone: 's Will and Jade
:iconraycchan: 's Tibberius



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KannaAsa's avatar

That talk about the woman being a disguised man was a fluke, right?