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The Untold - part 33 by Antarija The Untold - part 33 by Antarija
Khail's lies gave me a  chance to bring you even more boring-lore-stuff from my arsenal :dummy:
Not too much action this time. Our dear team just took a litle break to find some dinner, ask some questions or just to annoy some new teammates.

The thing Burgh gave them is another enchanted crystal, it works just like a normal flare.




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:iconbigblondbeautiful:
BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017
Man I have never seen anyone make those three pushovers look actually intimidating and or powerful. props to you!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I want to make everyone scary! \('v')/
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:iconbigblondbeautiful:
BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017
well you've succeeded thus far haha



Exsept n, he is a baby
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Give him more time : P
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:iconbigblondbeautiful:
BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017
if anyone makes him creepy I'm sure you can make him cute and creepy XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohoho, the challenge ~creepy face - undertale chat icon - chara 
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:iconbigblondbeautiful:
BigBlondBeautiful Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017
Backing away slowly that gif you sent me is so creepy XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good, goood~
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LuckyCap Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YEAH FUCK LENORA she was always the gym leader I hated the most
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, she might be a bit annoying : P
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LuckyCap Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry I didn't mean to get so angry but I have some bad Nuzloke memories with her and her fucking Watchog god Hypnosis and Retaliate are an evil combo
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, don't worry about it, we all have this one character we really hate, after all ; D for me it's Bianca...
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TheFourthSword Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016
Man I love the world building! It keeps me wanting more every time!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Big yay for people who likes those wall of texts! Yay! :dummy:
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hgg I liek how you explained all the lore about guilds and the tensions between them :'D Making sense of the pokemon world isn't easy so I really appreciate that you did that with the added twist of having the setting in a fantasy version of the pokeverse. I guess we'll find out more about Khail's grudge against the guilds (and if it has to do with the bounty on his head lol)

Khail please, stop objectifying women they're not just a pretty face
they have boobies too
//bricked 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! >v<
Haha, I just hope I won't turn it all into another jar of absurdity... Fool Emoji-54 (Busted) [V5]
Twisted backstory will be there soon~ Well... "Soon" maybe isn't he right word.

Boobies with pretty faces then?
Ok, after a second though. Nope. Nopenopenope. :I
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sure it won't the explanations and everything up till now have been sensible and really interesting :'D (but on the tiny chance that it does, it will be so epic we can just ignore the absurdity LOL)

Everything is soon :'DDD ("eventually" may be a better word, less commitment XD)

and butts
//bricked even more 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe, thanks for the faith! xD

(Yeah, that might be a better word indeed~)

xD
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Jenniej92 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha i love how you explain everything, good job!
amazing page :clap:
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! : D
Hope the wall of thext wasn't too intimidating ^^"
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BlazeGlory Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
Just... WOW... When I started reading this comic I really wasn't certain of what to think because it was just so different from the original source material, but now after getting 33 chapters in and having time to digest it all I really love this series. The part that I especially like the most is how you turned the Gym (Guild) Leaders into people who are more concerned about their standing than anything else. It's just a real nice breath of fresh clean mountain air.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, I'm so glad to hear that! Day56 - Happy Cry
Since I planned to mess around with the whole Pokemon World for this run I wasn't really sure if people won't want my head for ruining the universe they knew... Good to know you enjoy it!
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BlazeGlory Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016
Your welcome and I like crazy head canons and fan fictions so this is gold to me
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Is that a Serperior with the Striaton leaders? We need a ground/poison, or Poison/ground snake like Pokemon. I mean we have the common poison snake, a Grass snake, a rock, and steel basalisks and two water serpents. We need a Sidwinder like Pokemon, make it happen Game Freak.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup, it's a Serperior. Well, maybe they thought there are enough of snake-like Pokemon already? Dunno.
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Darmanitan, and Carracosta 
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You can never have too many snake Pokemon. I need to try to guess the other two.
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Student Writer
Nice try, Khalil, but you're a protagonist(c). You can't exactly walk away... >.>
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It was worth a try, at least... : P
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Student Writer
:XD:
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Whoa nice worldbuilding!!!
i consistently have trouble creating my worlds so this is great inspiration!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! Glad to hear it! : D
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MysticD Featured By Owner Edited Jan 10, 2016
"We're quite strong tp outnumbers us"
"And If I Team Plasma" 
"You didn't really looked like that"

Three minor grammar mistakes you might wanna try fixing. :p
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Grazyfish Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
i think tp means team plasma so the first one is correct
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LamentedGuide Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For crumpet's sake, Sheyri, why are you so damn cute? XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She's a cat. That's why kaomoji set 1 7/19 
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WFengs Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
Poor Akashe didn't get any dialogue on this page XD
It's kind of cool to see Khail's background again, not to mention the dynamic between the guilds and members.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Akashe sure needs more love. Poor thing xD

Thank you, glad you think so! ^^
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TheBookwormMaddy Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I love his expression when he's all like 'I fucking hate their guts' Ohhh hot damn just fuck me up <333
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Makoto Tachibana Sexy Hair 
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ThomasIsMe Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that giant smile red so fire type... im calling darmanitan other 2 i dunno
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bingo : D
The other two are Serperior and Carracosta
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ThomasIsMe Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
makes sense though i wouldnt of guessed serperior since well "starter" but then again theres not alot of epic grass types that arent starters
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mysterykat12 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
are the pokemon the three starters that were silhouettes for the first three gym leaders????
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Not starters really, they're just silhoutes of their strongest Pokemon (well, I made it up : P)
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
What? Khail's two faced? I did not see that coming. XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No-one can be trusted : P
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ej ale ta trójka była z pierwszego Gyma, nie pamiętam, żeby mieli być jacyś creepy...
Akashe powinien szukać trufli, byłaby z tego niezła kasa! :D (w końcu w grze są takie itemy jak RareMushroom i podobne ;D)
Khail ty kłamco i manipulatorze ty, nos ci urośnie, zobaczysz! D:<
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bo oni są creepy tylko kiedy mieliby walczyć całą trójką jednocześnie, dlatego im nie pozwalają. Tak to z osobna są względnie normalni. Jak siostrzana głupawka, tylko gorzej : P
Może i szuka, kto wie. Nikt mu do żołądka nie zagląda, ohoho ;D
Oj no weź, jak on będzie wyglądał z takim długim nosem xD
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