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The Untold - part 15 by Antarija The Untold - part 15 by Antarija
Meet Cheren - the most cheerful buddy in the whole Unova :dummy:

I thought I'll manage to be on time with this part but... well...
Just three words:

Dragon Age: Innquisition  *-*


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Velink Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2016  Hobbyist
what is the tepig's name again, I forget
I wonder why it hate psychic type, maybe because it will become a fighting type?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
His name is Akashe ;]
Who knows~? Maybe he just hates everything that can get into his head.
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T-Tylon Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015
Now that i'm re-reading the nuzlocke, i've come to wonder something about this page : why did you choose this uncluttered approach for your drawing ? (Note that i'm not criticizing your decision the slightest ; i'm still in awe with your skill with the pencil. Simply curious.)

(P.S: If the question has already been asked, then please accept my excuses but i just couldn't check through all the comments. You're quite the popular one :D (Big Grin) )
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hm, sorry but I'm not sure if I understood the question right ^^"

If you're asking about the reason for this page being in traditional - I didn't have my tablet with me back then but wanted to keep up with the schedule I've set up for this project. I've asked my readers (in the description for the previous part) if it would be ok for me to do this one part in a different media. They  agreed.

And if what you meant is why those backgrounds are so... empty, it's because I thought it would look better than if I tried to ruin everything with my mad landscape skills in every panel : P
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T-Tylon Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2015
Very well, i understand. By the way i wasn't nitpicking about the absence of neither colors or background (i mean traditionnal mangas are black & white after all.) It's just that since i've seen your other being colored but this one wasn't, i wondered what happened. That's all.

Nevertheless, thank you for answering me. I wish you good continuation with your work.
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem, I know it was a bit unexpected and some people were a little confused about it. The sudden change looks rather strange, especially when you read it in a row.

And thank you!
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015
I LIKE THAT BLACK & WHITE STYLE MAN!
I KNEW IT! IT WAS CHEREN
THIS IS THE FIRST NUZLOCKE COMIC WHERE THE PROTAGONIST & CHEREN AREN'T FRIENDS
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Antarija Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you, glad you like it!
Haha, yeah ^^
Really? Well, maybe that's because I didn't like that jerk... Dunno.
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ROJOyNARANJA Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015
IT'S O.K. I ACTUALLY DON'T DISLIKE CHEREN BUT I THINK HE ISN'T SO GREAT EITHER
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ShiguKun Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  Hobbyist
Awh, you're not a ninja... *disappointed*
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Antarija Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*pat pat*
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Yokufo Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your ability to display expressions is so fuuuu PRECELESS! XD
*has a great laugh at the comics every time a new page comes out*
Great job, dear! XD <3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my, thank you! owo
But honestly, I've always thought I was hopeless at expressions.... Friend used to tell me that everyone in my drawings looks either mad or... well, as if they want to kill someone  :P
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Jenniej92 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the expresssions are so intense here!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks!
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Krisantyne Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Everyone's so serious and angry. It's very entertaining to watch them at each other's throats. :'D
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Right? xD
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Mylezlocke Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015
This is the most professional looking Nuzlocke I've ever read! God damn it's like an officially produced series. How long does it take you to draw such detailed pages??
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my... I- I... :blush: But it's not that good.. <murmur> There are so many others far better than this one...
I'm just glad noone can see me now, because I'm grinning like an idiot here.

Thank you so much! (even if you exaggerate, I'm still really happy!) Making this page didn't take so long, something about 8 hours, I think. When it's made digitally it takes around 20 hours per page.
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wildCorvus Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015
Khail is so damn badassLlama Emoji-16 (Nose Bleed) [V1] 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahah, I can tell you that Khail's quite proud of himself that you think so.
Even if he's not gonna admit it ;P
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
TE MARKERY. Jak ty umiesz markery?!
Traditionale wychodzą ci wcale nie gorzej od digitali, pięknie jest!

A Nana na miniaturce składa się w połowie z różowości, a w drugiej połowie z oka :P
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kiedyż markery mnie nie słuchają! Wyczerpują się! Rozlewają! Potrzebuję dwóch par kombinerek żeby zdjąć nakrętkę! Taki bunt! D:

Jupi! Chociaż rysowanie komiksów w ten sposób jest denerwujące... Nie umiem postawic prostej linii... nawet od linijki... Trochę mi wstyd.

A oko też różowe :P
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SkadiErendra Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
No to masz twardą rękę, bo mimo takich buntowniczych zrywów i tak pracują za 110% normy :P

Proste linie są dla matematyków i innych fanów geometrii, o!

Czyli całość to róż!
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... Ale ja lubię matematykę...? D:

Na górze róż, na dole róż,  a środkiem Nana płyniee~
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Grusnoid Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015
Cheren is going to get his oshawott torched in this match. Pun intended. XD
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:kiwf: 
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THAT TRADITIONAL ART THO.

Lol Cheren left Bianca at the orphange. I need a moment. XD
Aw, Cheren and Khail are BFFS5EVA, I think I'm gonna cry too. 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just hope my shaking hands didn't destroy everything xD

Oh my... I've never thought about this that way. Now that you mentioned it... LOL, it really sounds sad xD
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Raycchan Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Rest assured, it didn't. ^^ It looks good!

Bianca might be happier there though. And both Cheren and Khail would be less stressed without having to deal with her stalking them. XD 
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True, true xD
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ZonnyBrown Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Khail you dummy
you won't get a girlfriend with this attitud of yours 8V
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, don't worry! Khail can be quite nice and charming if he wants to :P
I believe...

I hope...
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ZonnyBrown Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well he better be
because he might die from loneliness  8V
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Velink Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Hobbyist
Bianca is in the orphanage?
isn't there where Khail just came from?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup. Looks like they were just few days behind him.
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El-Diaz Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Nice story and art, I love the sotory so far. Watching so I can follow your comic :3
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! I'll do my best to keep it interesting ^^
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El-Diaz Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Then I'll wait for more. I liked the fact that you changed pokeballs and how it work the pokemon world :)
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad to hear that! : D
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FichuZ Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
DAI... I know. Me too. :P

But why in black and white now?
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Antarija Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahah, It's just impossible to resist... ^^'

Well, in the last part I've explained that I won't be able to do it digitally during the christmas break and asked if it wouldn't bother anyone if I do it in traditional this time. One person answered me, so I just did as he suggested ;]
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FichuZ Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015
Ah... I didn't saw that. :)
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